Post by Reyna on Nov 11, 2006 17:25:10 GMT -5
This thread is to make fun of the stuff I write in school And by that, I mean... WHen I'm soposed to be doing WORK, I just write stuff. THis is where you make fun of me ^^ {ANd yes. I /already/ know ita bad. I want to know /how/ bad.}
This is actually part of a roleplay, but I changed it from text chat. So thats where the crappy plot came from. Dont ask why theyre on a roof >_> I dunno.
“How could you do that to them?!” The cat demon hissed, her claws extended. She rushed across the five story roof to the raven haired boy, smacking him in the face.
“Do it again, baka. I have a reasonable explanation for what I did. Cloud-teme, did not.” The boy glared, not flinching.
The fox demon watching the two growled deeply, glaring at Sasuke. If looks could kill, it would have been a bloodbath. “You ruined his AND his familys lives! That’s a MUCH better reason than yours!!” she snarled.
“Yes Kitsune. HIS life was ruined. HE stayed in an MI for 3 years and has had family problems ever since. CLOUD wasn't allowed to see his wife for 4 years AFTER he was in an MI for 3 years. Oh wait you DUMB*** ******, that was MEGAMI. WHOS LIFE WAS RUINED BECAUSE OF A MAN YOU LOVE THAT WON’T EVER LOVE YOU BACK.” Sasuke growled, mirroring Kitsune’s gaze. Kitsune’s fur bristled more, about to reply when Sasuke suddenly charged, impaling her through the chest with a kunai, pushing her back about three feet. Two feet farther than the roof went. It took the weakened fox demon 13 seconds to hit the ground without trying to land on her feet.
(this part is Kitsunes POV XD)
Falling… uggh… turn head… twist spine… follow though with body… land safely…
Cloud… ‘wont ever love you back!’
I know he wont… he has Naomi… why settle for someone… like /me/? He has a family… hes happy… and he should be…
So… he wont need me anymore…
I’m useless…
Cant even protect him….
I cant even protect my love….
Useless…
…… Will I ever see him again?
Cloud… I’m so sorry…
(3rd person again?)
Her last thoughts before hitting the ground were of her love… that will never show the same feelings for her.
I'm gonna go hide under a rock while everyone laughs XD Ninja Kitty will be in charge.
Ninja Kitty: Oh yes.
This is actually part of a roleplay, but I changed it from text chat. So thats where the crappy plot came from. Dont ask why theyre on a roof >_> I dunno.
“How could you do that to them?!” The cat demon hissed, her claws extended. She rushed across the five story roof to the raven haired boy, smacking him in the face.
“Do it again, baka. I have a reasonable explanation for what I did. Cloud-teme, did not.” The boy glared, not flinching.
The fox demon watching the two growled deeply, glaring at Sasuke. If looks could kill, it would have been a bloodbath. “You ruined his AND his familys lives! That’s a MUCH better reason than yours!!” she snarled.
“Yes Kitsune. HIS life was ruined. HE stayed in an MI for 3 years and has had family problems ever since. CLOUD wasn't allowed to see his wife for 4 years AFTER he was in an MI for 3 years. Oh wait you DUMB*** ******, that was MEGAMI. WHOS LIFE WAS RUINED BECAUSE OF A MAN YOU LOVE THAT WON’T EVER LOVE YOU BACK.” Sasuke growled, mirroring Kitsune’s gaze. Kitsune’s fur bristled more, about to reply when Sasuke suddenly charged, impaling her through the chest with a kunai, pushing her back about three feet. Two feet farther than the roof went. It took the weakened fox demon 13 seconds to hit the ground without trying to land on her feet.
(this part is Kitsunes POV XD)
Falling… uggh… turn head… twist spine… follow though with body… land safely…
Cloud… ‘wont ever love you back!’
I know he wont… he has Naomi… why settle for someone… like /me/? He has a family… hes happy… and he should be…
So… he wont need me anymore…
I’m useless…
Cant even protect him….
I cant even protect my love….
Useless…
…… Will I ever see him again?
Cloud… I’m so sorry…
(3rd person again?)
Her last thoughts before hitting the ground were of her love… that will never show the same feelings for her.
I'm gonna go hide under a rock while everyone laughs XD Ninja Kitty will be in charge.
Ninja Kitty: Oh yes.